19th May 2010, 5:00 PM
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Author Notes:
I have to be honest, I wasn't terribly impressed with the writing on this one. It just didn't seem to want to flow nicely. I tweaked it several times (Originally the last panel was just "I don't shuffle." or something like that...) but I'm still not happy with it.
You may or may not have noticed the store link. It's mainly just there for testing purposes right now, but I did finally put the Bunneh shirt up... It's still wonky, mind you, because Zazzle wants to take white and make it 'background' rather than keep it white. Any suggestions from people who know how Zazzle works?
This strip was important to show that Beth's libido has come about recently, and is not something typical of zombies. They aren't all frustrated, it just doesn't come up... Except for Beth :) It was also a case where the character rebelled against some of the writing that got taken out... I originally had Beth in a much more vulnerable position where she was suggesting that she'd be willing to change if it would make John like her more... This might happen in time, but Current Beth seems like she would be more likely to mock him for wanting her to be different than offer to change for him.
So, not happy with it, but it's done. It's not the first time I've settled, probably wont be the last time, but I assure it wont be every time ;)
Have a great weekend, and if you're Canadian, enjoy Victoria Day! Long weekend (or stat holiday pay!) wooo!!
I just wanted to publicly apologise to Magravan for changing the storyline by drawing something he hadn't intended. Let's all let him know, that if he wants me to draw something a certain way, he has to specify that in the script. :P Can't just go writing only the text words and leaving everything else up to me, unless he wants Beth to be a sex-crazed lunatic.
Maybe she channels me sometimes.... hmm...
Any way, not much to say, but I thought Beth was cute in Panel 3, so I made a soft-shaded version of her. If you're interested in seeing this, go here:
i49.tinypic.com/206d9ig.jpg
I think I might re-do the cast page in this style at some point. :P
Also, i tried the u-stream thing, but it kept on crashing on me. It was really breaking up my artistic zoning so I decided to cut it out for now. I'll try again later.
User comments:
Note to self: revise survival manual with tips for safe sex with cute, undead redheads.
@Tom Day - She's got more shuffle than a typical zombie too :)
@Solem Saje - Might require a biosuit, but there are some advantages :D
@Guest - Sadly, there is no 'May make you ill" warning ;) However, we CAN say "We haven't made anyone sick yet!" so far as I know.
I love this webcomic, it's hilarious, the art is good and I find myself being able o love the characters.
Great job <3
@Anton - I'm glad you're enjoying it! Do you have a favourite character?
I love how smoothly you went from the green stuff thing to this... thing. U got an A+ from me :3
I didnt puke, but I sure don't feel so hot XD
Punishment from above, wether it be gods will or the brain (me) that let it happened, its all punishment from above
lol
@Ferix - I'm pretty sure that divine punishment should be a little more impressive than a bout of nausea ;)
That said, I'm glad you changed the story. I can't see Beth being the type of zombie who would change just to make John like her. She seems too independent for that.
Looks like her hoomanity grew when she kame in contact wif John, nya! ;p
Ah she doesn't zombie-glomp him though, minya! "^w^ If her straightforwardness keeps growin'2, mrrrf! ;p
@Aerix Spades - Hopefully she doesn't ;)
Oh and on the U-stream problem. I haven't personally used U-stream, but I have used Live-Stream (Just to be an idiot with friends.) and it works pretty good for what you were planning to do with U-stream, might wanna give it a gander.
@Syaoran - That's actually what she ended up using, I believe.. And as for Beth, let's just say that she has a number of urges towards John, and hasn't really acted fully on them yet ;) She's a pillar of restraint.
@Lunaris_Starchilde - That's good, that is what she does to John too.. :D
And yes, it is wrong. Horribly, horribly wrong. (But we wont tell anyone) :)
@Degas I am really not sure that I could go down on a dead chick, imagine the smell!